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New paragraph = New T ime, P lace, T opic, or P erson (TiPToP).

Spend 5 minutes planning, 25 minutes writing, and 5 minutes checking for silly mistakes. To help you practice, could you tell me: Are you writing a creative story or a persuasive argument ?

"The fog was a thick, gray blanket, swallowing the trees whole." 2. Show, Don't Tell